I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
hi there mathew my name is chloe from yms I think this is a very short story maybe next time you can make the writing a bit bigger and write more. from chloe king at yms school.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
hi there mathew my name is chloe from yms I think this is a very short story maybe next time you can make the writing a bit bigger and write more. from chloe king at yms school.
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