I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Matthew, Talisa here from Hornby Primary School in Room 7. I like the way you added an interesting video. I have 3 brothers 0 sisters they play video games too. Next time you could check for capitals and add more writing. Goodbye
Kia ora Matthew. I wonder where your learning posts have got to. Remember that this blog is for sharing your learning. I will help you with some posts when you come to Literacy.
Hello Matthew, Jaedun here from Hornby Primary School in Room 7. I like the way you added an interesting video. I have 3 brothers 4 sisters included half siblings they play video games too like Minecraft. Next time you could check for capitals and add more writing. Goodbye
Hi Matthew. I liked that the title is relevant to the post. I wonder what William is playing. Next time you could work on capital letters and make sure it's a learning post.
Kia Ora Matthew, Kirsty here! I think this blog post needs a bit of work. I think you should be posting about your learning. Do you ever post about learning? Do you reply to comments? Bye.
Hello Matthew, Acasia here I wonder what video game he's playing? But at the same time This isn't really about learning so maybe next time you should check if it is or not. Next time you should add a quick next step to keep people interested on your post?
Kia ora, Milla here! This seems pretty cool! what game was he playing? I couldn't see the video sadly :( was it a math game? but all you needa do is describe it please!! - Milla
Kia ora Matthew, I love this it's funny, but where is your school work?! Will you do school work soon on here because knowing your class they use computers a lot and you should blog alot more. That's all I can say bye!
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Hello Matthew, Talisa here from Hornby Primary School in Room 7. I like the way you added an interesting video. I have 3 brothers 0 sisters they play video games too. Next time you could check for capitals and add more writing.
ReplyDeleteGoodbye
Kia ora Matthew.
ReplyDeleteI wonder where your learning posts have got to. Remember that this blog is for sharing your learning. I will help you with some posts when you come to Literacy.
Hello Matthew, Jaedun here from Hornby Primary School in Room 7. I like the way you added an interesting video. I have 3 brothers 4 sisters included half siblings they play video games too like Minecraft. Next time you could check for capitals and add more writing.
ReplyDeleteGoodbye
matthew is this your Lamborghini
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DeleteHi Matthew how is it going over there. Have a nice time.
ReplyDeleteHi Matthew.
ReplyDeleteI liked that the title is relevant to the post. I wonder what William is playing. Next time you could work on capital letters and make sure it's a learning post.
Kia Ora Matthew, Kirsty here! I think this blog post needs a bit of work. I think you should be posting about your learning. Do you ever post about learning? Do you reply to comments? Bye.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Kian here that game looks like a lot of fun maybe next time you could explain what game he played bye.
ReplyDeleteHello Matthew,
ReplyDeleteAcasia here I wonder what video game he's playing? But at the same time This isn't really about learning so maybe next time you should check if it is or not. Next time you should add a quick next step to keep people interested on your post?
Kia ora, Milla here!
ReplyDeleteThis seems pretty cool! what game was he playing? I couldn't see the video sadly :( was it a math game? but all you needa do is describe it please!!
- Milla
Kia ora Matthew,
ReplyDeleteI love this it's funny, but where is your school work?! Will you do school work soon on here because knowing your class they use computers a lot and you should blog alot more. That's all I can say bye!