I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Matthew, Jaedun Here from Hornby Primary. You did good with the photo and title. Maybe next time you could do more writing. What is your favourite car? Next time you could blur out the license plate.
Hi Matthew, My name is Tory from Hornby Primary School. Good Job on having a title. I like your picture because it makes your post interesting. Maybe you could add some capitals letters to your title? You could also add some information to your post? Maybe you could do a post about your school work?
Hello, Talisa here from HPS in Room 7. Nice photo. The picture is really interesting. I know I don't have the money to buy a Lamborghini. Next time you could put capitals in your title, add more info and cover your licence plate so people can't track you down. Well Goodbye
Kia orana, Matthew I'm Basty your friend maybe I like super cars, but maybe you could add something that you did, please put Capital letters on your title, and make your title interesting like best lamborghini. Bye
Hello matthew is that Your or somebody one and is that real? i'm just wondering are you in thailand now it would be awesome if you take photos of you and your family. bye and have a amazing time in thailand! see you back at school!!! bye!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Matthew, Jaedun Here from Hornby Primary. You did good with the photo and title. Maybe next time you could do more writing. What is your favourite car? Next time you could blur out the license plate.
ReplyDeleteHi Matthew,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Tory from Hornby Primary School. Good Job on having a title. I like your picture because it makes your post interesting. Maybe you could add some capitals letters to your title? You could also add some information to your post? Maybe you could do a post about your school work?
I should do it
DeleteHello, Talisa here from HPS in Room 7. Nice photo. The picture is really interesting. I know I don't have the money to buy a Lamborghini. Next time you could put capitals in your title, add more info and cover your licence plate so people can't track you down. Well Goodbye
ReplyDeleteKia orana,
ReplyDeleteMatthew I'm Basty your friend maybe I like super cars, but maybe you could add something that you did, please put Capital letters on your title, and make your title interesting like best lamborghini. Bye
Hello matthew is that Your or somebody one and is that real? i'm just wondering are you in thailand now it would be awesome if you take photos of you and your family. bye and have a amazing time in thailand! see you back at school!!! bye!
ReplyDeleteYes I am in thailand and it is real bye.
ReplyDelete