I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
hi Matthew how are you doing today I love your snowman. your story is not to good? you are good. ummm can you see your witting before you publish you can look at it before you witre
Kia Ora Matthew, This is great start to a story for a certain character. Next time you could add more punctuation and check your writing before you publish it to the web. But great job!
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hi Matthew how are you doing today I love your snowman. your story is not to good? you are good. ummm can you see your witting before you publish
ReplyDeleteyou can look at it before you witre
Kia Ora Matthew,
ReplyDeleteThis is great start to a story for a certain character. Next time you could add more punctuation and check your writing before you publish it to the web. But great job!