I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Matthew, Talisa here from HPS. Your video is pretty cool. I don't think I have one of those. What are you holding? Next time maybe you could add information about what your blog post is about and put capitals in your title. Goodbye
Kia ora matthew i like the video that you made with Jacob And Willam. maybe out somore information and capital letter for the names. maybe you could put some pics as well and put more writing about you Jacob and Willam. but its good.what part did you enjoy the most at the sleepover? how fun was it? thats all for now blog yah later! #AWESOME ~CHRISTINA
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Hello Matthew, Talisa here from HPS. Your video is pretty cool. I don't think I have one of those. What are you holding? Next time maybe you could add information about what your blog post is about and put capitals in your title.
ReplyDeleteGoodbye
Kia ora matthew i like the video that you made with Jacob And Willam.
ReplyDeletemaybe out somore information and capital letter for the names. maybe you could put some pics as well and put more writing about you Jacob and Willam.
but its good.what part did you enjoy the most at the sleepover?
how fun was it? thats all for now blog yah later! #AWESOME ~CHRISTINA
Ok
DeleteTHE SLEEPOVER WAS AMAZING!!!!!.
DeleteBulla matthew
ReplyDeleteIts Ashton i like the video of William and Jacob.
i agree with christina what you should do.
Ok i will
Deletekia aro matthew
ReplyDeleteit is tane from your school
i like that video of jacob and william
i agree with christina what you should do