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Hi Matthew its Ashton THEy thing i noticed that was realy cool was the way you put the facts and how much detail you put in them. My favourite fact was that they can be found in mountains because i never knew foxes were fit to survive in mountains. what i think you could work on better is the way you deliver the slides.
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Hi Matthew its Ashton
ReplyDeleteTHEy thing i noticed that was realy cool was the way you put the facts and how much detail you put in them.
My favourite fact was that they can be found in mountains because i never knew foxes were fit to survive in mountains.
what i think you could work on better is the way you deliver the slides.
really good were did you find that gif it look cool
ReplyDeleteand nice slide