I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, 7 May 2020
Today I am going to read my own story I made up it is called being big
Once a pond a time there was a little boy called Tom he had a big brother called Tim they lived in a forest in a very big house but....... they heard noises in there house they thought it would be a monster so they went in there house but...... The noise was gone so they went upstairs and they heard the noises again so they went out of the house and went behind the house and saw a very big bear so then they screamed and got inside the house then Tom said remember the potion then Tom said we can scare the bear by drinking the potion then Tim said ummmmmm that is a bad idea so Tom did not listen to his big brother so he drank it then he gro big and big and big and bigger so he accident stood on their house and he nearly stands on Tim and he said OMG you nearly hit me then all the bears in the forest came out then attacked Tom and Tim went behind the king bear and Tim JUMPED on the bear then the bear was out of control then Tim flew of the bear then Tom screams then all the bears ran away and so they have not got the house so they bought a bigger house and that was the end of the story. Hope you guys liked the story bye.
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