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Friday 1 May 2020

I read a book called The thing Lou couldn't do

Hello Everyone today I read a book called The thing Lou couldn't do. The book was all about Avenchars and trying to climb up a tree. What was the book all about. There was a little girl named Lou she loves Avenchars And she has lot's of friends that she plays with her friends wanted to play pirates but she said We don't have a ship than her friends said We can use a tree then she said But.....She can't climb a tree Sooo she brightened that her arm was very sore and she needed to go walk her cat than so she went in the house then her mum said why don't you play with your friends than she went outside then all her friends said come on the tree but she said I can't climb a tree They said there is all ways another way then she said oh yeah right ok so the first thing she did is going on a helicopter but it did not work so she tried the 2 time she uses a trampoline but it did not work so then she tried a high jump stick but not working so she tried and tried climbing and it WORKED!!!!!!! so they played that's what the story is all about.what was your favorite pat comment bellow Bye-bye.

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  1. That is an easy question to answer Matthew.The part I liked most was the bit where after she had tried and tried all these different ideas, she came to the conclusion to just give climbing a go and she was successful,She didn't give up.We can all learn from this story.This was a really good re-count of this story well done.Please remember full stops and capital letters.Also read through to see if you can pick up any spelling errors.Stay positive about your writing this was a really good effort.Stay awesome.

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